
I've owned, and been meaning to read, this for years. Indeed my copy is marked up at the start of Vol II; but I get ahead of myself. First, an intro. Quotes are mostly taken from
this online copy or
SEP.
Vol I is dull, and is a sarcastic refutation of the patriarchal theory of Sir Robert Filmer, who tries to justsify the divine right of kings from the authority that God gave Adam. Locke tediously refutes this, but really you're best off reading the summary at the start of Vol II, viz: Firstly. That Adam had not... any such authority over his children,
nor dominion over the world, as is pretended.
Secondly. That if he had, his heirs yet had no right to it.
Thirdly. That if his heirs had, there being no law of Nature nor
positive law of God that determines which is the right heir in all cases
that may arise, the right of succession, and consequently of bearing
rule, could not have been certainly determined.
Fourthly. That if even that had been determined, yet the knowledge
of which is the eldest line of Adam’s posterity being so long since utterly
lost, that in the races of mankind and families of the world, there remains not to one above another the least pretence to be the eldest house,
and to have the right of inheritance. Indeed, point four pretty well suffices on its own. It is perhaps worth noting that Vol I begins Slavery is so vile and miserable an estate of man...
No more of Vol I, we move on to Vol II.
We begin with The State of Nature. Locke is whifflier than Hobbes; his SoN is a State of Liberty not of Licence; we may for example not kill ourselves, because we are the Property of God1. Similarly, we are enjoined not to take away the life limbs or goods of others. And anyone may punish transgression of this Law of Nature. Hobbes, and I, say this is piffle: with no-one to judge, there is no law; and no-one can be judge in his own cause2, as Hobbes says and common sense dictates. Moreover the founding of all this on God is regrettable; if Locke's work is only for the God-fearing I will put it down with a yawn. Para 11 - still in the SoN chapter - starts talking about the powers of the Magistrate; this is very confusing. L seems very hung up on rights of punishment; Hobbes has no such burden.
Para 14 asks if we were ever in a SoN, and answers Yes, since currently different countries effectively are. This is an error, a confusion, between people and countries. Hobbes, correctly, says that countries are indeed in a SoN; at least they were then and to some extent still are now; the international Civil Sword is weak.
Chapter 3 moves on to War, and discovers that the LoN also says when all cannot be preserved, the safety of the innocent is to be preferred. L is not parsimonious of his LoN; essentially, it says anything he wants it to. He notes that where an appeal to the Law … lies open, but the remedy is deny’d by a manifest perverting of Justice, … there it is hard to imagine any thing but a State of War. For wherever violence is used, and injury done, though by hands appointed to administer Justice, it is still violence and injury, however colour’d with the Name, Pretences, or Forms of Law…” This is a rather more pragmatic approach that Hobbes, who would point out that L here is assuming that everyone can recognise injustice when they see it. And, to avoid the SoN turning everywhere into the SoW, men naturally turn to setting up Authority on earth.
2025/05: that was written around 2024/07; and this having sat around in this state for a while, I now throw it into the world unfinished.
Notes
1. This would appear to make us the slaves of God; and being the slave, even of a good master, is surely vile; this is a conclusion that you may be sure Locke does not draw.
2. L's answer is para 13, which is basically WP:OTHER: if people shouldn't be their own judges, what about kings, eh? Eh? And then digs another hole for himself with at least in the SoN, people are not "bound to submit to the unjust will of another" - taking it for granted that there is a good defn of unjust, that everyone recognises and agrees on it. This is more piffle. Later (para 19, SoW) puts further obstacles in the way of private justice.
3. Fans of Hamas-vs-Israel will like one may destroy a man who makes war upon him, or has discovered an enmity to his being, for the same reason that he may kill a wolf or a lion, because they are not under the ties of the common law of reason, have no other rule but that of force and violence, and so may be treated as a beast of prey, those dangerous and noxious creatures that will be sure to destroy him whenever he falls into their power.